literature

Surreal World

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Literature Text

When the world around you feels so surreal
And you can't tell what's fake or for real
So you work your way through, trying to discover
And your memory's lost, so you're trying to recover

Feeling as if all the pages have flown
And wishing if only the world was clear and you'd known
But your brain is filled with plain morning dew
And is leaving you empty as the chilled wind blew
just a poem i wrote in class were we had to use 3 specific words and write it within 10min.

-picture found on google and not my own

-my other poems here:


***other version (which is better?):

When the world around you feels surreal
And you can't tell between fake and real
So you work your way through, trying to discover
And your memory's lost, so you're trying to recover

Feeling as if all the pages have flown
And wishing if only the world was clear and you'd known
But your brain is filled with plain morning dew
And is leaving you empty as the chilled wind blew
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NwgroGuerra's avatar
like the 2nd one more :D