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When the world around you feels so surreal
And you can't tell what's fake or for real
So you work your way through, trying to discover
And your memory's lost, so you're trying to recover

Feeling as if all the pages have flown
And wishing if only the world was clear and you'd known
But your brain is filled with plain morning dew
And is leaving you empty as the chilled wind blew
just a poem i wrote in class were we had to use 3 specific words and write it within 10min.

-picture found on google and not my own

-my other poems here:


***other version (which is better?):

When the world around you feels surreal
And you can't tell between fake and real
So you work your way through, trying to discover
And your memory's lost, so you're trying to recover

Feeling as if all the pages have flown
And wishing if only the world was clear and you'd known
But your brain is filled with plain morning dew
And is leaving you empty as the chilled wind blew
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NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
like the 2nd one more :D
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102vvv Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm at this moment in time id have to agree ^_^
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:iconnwgroguerra:
NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha and in what moment you wouldn't agree?
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102vvv Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
when i originally wrote it xD lol i duno oppion changes due to mood and time =3
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NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah you are right on that one :aww: but the important is that you know what you where trying to say and grow from there.
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102vvv Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
practice makes perfect :D
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:iconnwgroguerra:
NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
exactly and you are doing just fine if I may say it so.
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102vvv Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
teehee well thank you very much ^__^
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PUSHER-ARTS Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011   Digital Artist
very nice idea
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102vvv Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you^^<3
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